Jonathan Grimshaw handwriting ends; Leo Hawkins begins.
TEXT: Pages 11–14 were removed from the martyrdom account draft and placed into this more final copy of the martyrdom account. The pages were renumbered to conform to the pagination of this copy. Jonathan Grimshaw likely canceled the previous line of text at the time the page was moved, since he had already written it on the previous page.
This and all other insertions on this page are in the handwriting of Jonathan Grimshaw. It is unknown whether these insertions were made when this page was part of the martyrdom account draft or after it was moved into this copy.
Jonathan Grimshaw wrote “is” over Leo Hawkins’s “er” in “Bettersworth”, thus changing “Bettersworth” to “Bettissworth”.
Cancellation in the handwriting of Jonathan Grimshaw.
TEXT: Ink smudge on page, obscuring the text; text supplied from JS History, vol. F-1.
Jonathan Grimshaw wrote “is” over Leo Hawkins’s “er” in “Bettersworth”, thus changing “Bettersworth” to “Bettissworth”.