TEXT: In the 1850s, when JS’s history was being compiled, one of the church historians—likely Robert L. Campbell—wrote “Revise” in the left margin.
TEXT: A section of text was cut out of this second printed draft. When Willard Richards wrote his draft, he clipped pieces of printed text and pasted them to blank paper and wrote around the printed text block. Pieces of text pasted to page 9 of Richards’s draft likely came from this printed draft.
TEXT: A second section of text cut out of this printed draft was likely pasted to page 10 of Willard Richards’s draft.