Insertion in handwriting of Willard Richards. Triple underlined.
Printed text begins. This text block was cut from the first fragment of the first printed draft and pasted here.
John Taylor struck through the second “F” of “CONFFRENCE”, marking the typographic mistake.
Insertion in handwriting of Willard Richards.
Insertion in handwriting of Willard Richards written to to the right side of the pasted-in printed text.
TEXT: “ng”—from “Brigham Young”—was written over the printed text when John Taylor revised the first printed draft.
TEXT: John Taylor struck through the upside-down “e” of “business”, marking the typographic mistake.
TEXT: “l”—from “H. C Kimball”—was written over the printed text when John Taylor revised the first printed draft.
TEXT: John Taylor struck through the “c” of “somc”, marking the typographic mistake. The whole phrase “for somc time” was then stricken by either Taylor or Willard Richards.
Cancellation and insertion written to the left side of the pasted-in printed text in the handwriting of Willard Richards.
TEXT: “ruf”—from “Wilford Woodruf”—was written over the printed text when John Taylor revised the first printed draft.
Printed text ends; Willard Richards handwriting begins.
TEXT: Wafer residue indicates Richards pasted another clipping of printed text here to replace the canceled text. There is text cut from the first fragment of the first printed draft that is likely what was pasted here.
TEXT: Possibly “<t>he”.