TEXT: In the 1850s, when JS’s History was being compiled, one of the church historians—likely Robert L. Campbell—wrote “you must alter this to suit”.
TEXT: This text was written in the left margin of the proof sheet and ran over printed text that was later cut out of the proof sheet and pasted into Willard Richards’s draft. Missing text supplied from context. The top right margin has also been torn away.
TEXT: An ink smudge covers the last three letters of Taylor’s name.
All insertions and cancellations are in the handwriting of John Taylor.
Extant part of printed text begins. A section of text was cut out of this first printed draft. When Willard Richards wrote his draft, he clipped pieces of printed text, pasted them to blank paper, and wrote around the printed text block. A piece of text pasted to page 1 of Richards’s draft came from this printed draft.
Taylor struck through the “e”, marking the typographic mistake.
TEXT: A second section of text was cut out of this proof sheet. Part of the cut-out portion was possibly pasted to page 2 of Willard Richards’s draft.
TEXT: This “n” could be a letter correction for a word in the missing text.
TEXT: This insertion in the left margin was intended either to replace part of the missing text or to add onto it.
Printed text resumes after the missing text.
TEXT: Taylor struck through the upside-down “v”, marking the typographic mistake.
TEXT: Taylor struck through the second “c”, marking the typographic mistake.
TEXT: An asterisk symbol was inserted here in graphite corresponding to a similar symbol on a fragment of the second printed draft, incorrectly indicating that the fragment should be added here. This fragment of the second printed draft was later pasted to this first printed draft.